One day, Kyle and his father were driving home at night. Suddenly, a truck smashed into the car. Kyle and his father got very serious injury. Then, the truck driver killed Kyle's father because he didn't want to be caught by police. He first broke the window and killed Kyle's father. He tried to kill Kyle, too, but the sound of a camera interrupted him. A girl who took the picture was Elin. The truck driver was afraid that she would tell the police, so the truck driver tries to kill Elin. Elin ran away behind the bushes, and she heard the truck driver saying, "Don't tell anyone. If you do, I will kill you, too." and as so as he said that, the police came and he ran away. The father was dead, but Kyle was still alive. When Kyle woke up at the hospital, he talked about what happened at that night when his father was killed.
The next day, there was a judgement to see whether the truck driver killed Kyle's father or not. He was caught by the CCTV nearby the road. Elin worried about whether she should come to the justice or not. She thought that she should tell the truth to everyone and say that the truck driver killed Kyle's father, but she was also scared that the truck driver would kill her, remembering what he said to her.
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All I said after reading your story was.. Brilliant! Your story explains well in describing a dilemma Elin has: whether to tell the truth or not. All the three endings are also well explained and do not digress from the body part. I am very impressed. What you could have improved is more elaboration on the court session, the facial expressions or behaviors of the criminal, and Kyle's response to the result of the court. Keep up the good work :)
ReplyDeleteBut.. What is your title of the story?
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